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Which of these sentences is correct? 1) These deals do not derive from the arise of need of money of a company. 2) These deals do not derive from the arising of the need for money of a company. 3) These deals do not derive from the arising of needing money of a company. 4) ... other Thank you <3

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Neither are 100%, but they're very close. You can say "these deals do not derive from the need of money from a company" You could also say, "These deals do not derive from the rising need for money of a company" however when you say it like that the sentence is a little awkard and might be a bit difficult for many to understand exactly what you're trying to say. A rewording will make the sentence clearer and and easier to understand.
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None of them are really good, mainly because you are using the same preps over and over and they turn into a long chain which is hard to grasp. You could rephrase them like this: These deals do not derive from a company’s growing financial need.

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