Is the structure of the text right (please correct if appropriate)
The proposals were developed for the realization of scientifically proven data on the actual level of risk for the health of adult inhabitants depending upon real conditions of living in the ecologically disadvantaged region of the Aral sea region and the influence of ecological and hygienic factors.
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Yes, this is grammatically and structurally correct. “For the realization of” is a little bit vague. Consider “The proposals were developed in order to obtain scientifically proven data . . . “
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