Would you please correct my sentences?
One of my persona achievement that I feel proud is that loosing my weight/ finding my favorite job

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"Losing some weight and finding my favourite job are two personal achievements I am proud of"
"One of my personal achievements I am proud of is finding a new job".
"Two personal achievements I am proud of are losing some weight and finding my favourite job".

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One of my personal achievements that i feel proud of : is loosing my weight and finding my favorite job💕

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My personal achievements on which I feel proud that is loosing my weight and finding my favorite job.

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I am proud of this personal achievement of mine: losing weight/finding my favorite job.
If I understood well, you only want to mention one of them, not both. Am I right?

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