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Please, check my sentences. 1. Reading the fairy tale “The Chronicles of Narnia” left indelible expressions for my children. 2. A criminal petrified when heard a lawyer’s inconvertible proofs. 3. I don't think, guys, that it’s a right path to cling on the one idea and reject others.

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1. Reading the fairy tale "The Chronicles of Narnia" let indelible IMPRESSIONS ON my children. 2. The criminal was petrified when he heard a lawyer's indubitable proofs. 3. I don't think, guys, that it's the right path to cling to the one idea and reject the others. (But I would say, "I don't think, guys, that it's right to cling to one idea and reject the others." Or instead of right, "a good idea to...") Hope this helps!
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Each one is more than good enough to communicate. . Here's my two small notes for a more natural word choice. The criminal WAS petrified. Number 3, should be either: ...that it's THE right path or ...it's a good path. Also, proof can be singular unless you really want to emphasize the many proofs. It could be reworded: The proof was incontrevertible. Hearing the lawyer say it petrified the criminal. One more even smaller note. In a court case your criminal would be called a defendant.

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