Could you please make these capitalized sentences simple?
AFTER A COMMISSION EXAMINED AND REVAMPED COMMUNICATIONS PROCEDURES, THE STATEWIDE RESPONSE ‘HAS BECOME FAR MORE PROFESSIONAL AND RESPONSIVE,’ HE SAYS. There is a sense among both government officials and residents that the speed, dedication, and coordination of firefighters from several states and jurisdictions are resulting in greater efficiency than in past ‘siege fire’ situations.

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I'd simplify it like this: "After a task group looked at and changed the way communication is done, the responses across the state 'have become far more proper and are reacting and responding better,' he says."

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