Is this sentence correct? or is there a better way to write it?
In the introduction to his book, the author states that he decided to compile the systematic lists because of the complications he encountered during his work on the first two of his books.

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Great! The last sentence should be “during his work on his first two books”, or “while working on his first two books.” 
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