It is most important that your essay is grammatically correct. For an example of a personal narrative essay, go to; http://www.italki.com/knowledge/contribution-PERSONAL+NARRATIVE+ESSAY+EXAMPLE.htm The following website is excellent for: grammar, punctuation,using hyphens,semicolons, colons, parentheses, dashes, quotation marks, and italics. See: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/ In order to start your essay, you must brainstorm your topic first or create a MINDMAP OR PLAN. Your essay should contain : An Introduction- a paragraph that is 4-5 sentences long. Main body of essay -3-4 short paragraphs Conclusion - 4-5 sentences Proof read & edit your essay. Ask someone else to read it. Also don't forget to use the spell check/synonyms functions on your computer. Make sure that your paragraphs flow easily by using linking words e.g. furthermore, however, similarly, comparatively, on the other hand.

Hello Yukina, Before you try to improve your writing, you have to read more... novel, play, articles, letters after that try to right few lines about it... It won't be easy but at least you will try few technics. For few people writing is a gift but for others it is hard work... Bon courage !

Same pattern ? it is called the style. A good composition must have Introduction, body and conclusion. Practice to develop your writting style, composition could be easy.

My composition teacher used to tell me:' fine composition is the result of healthy intellect'. Try to sketch the topics of your paragraphs first. Each paragraph shall initially be represented briefly within a line. Then, once you have the main idea of your composition ready, judge the coherence of your thoughts, and then expand the initial lines into paragraphs and compose. This shall be a brief guide to beginner's text composition. There's more about composition.