Hello Pablo, The paragraph in general is well written with few mistakes as follows: - "My preferred activities are .....as this is ........ You didn't complete this sentence. Either you omit it or you mention those activities. - Some mistakes with the punctuation and the sentence structure in the following sentence: "I would like to visit those cities London and Cambridge, their monuments, do sightseeing and so on. As well as, get to know more about the British culture." *A possible correct form would be: "I would like to visit cities such as London and Cambridge, see their monuments, do sightseeing as well as get to know more about the British culture." - " to gain more speaking fluency" or " to gain more fluency in speaking" - " I am not used to living in the countryside" - " I hope to get used to it"

As this will be the first time I’ll be travelling to Great Britain, I would like to visit the cities of London and Cambridge, their monuments and do some sightseeing. I would like to get to know more about British culture. as well. In relation to the English lessons, I would like to focus on vocabulary and also gain more fluency in speaking English. I’ve got the FCE and now I’m going through to the Advanced level. By the way, I’m not very used to living in the countryside as I’ve always lived in the city. However I hope to get to used to it as I am very adaptable.