Do these sentences sound natural?
1 I would never excuse myself for giving up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

2 I will never justify giving up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

3 I will never give up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

Question

Do these sentences sound natural?
1 I would never excuse myself for giving up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

2 I will never justify giving up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

3 I will never give up on my dream by exchanging more money offered.

Answer

The sentence is too complicated!

I would never forgive myself for giving up on my dream.

Answer

Hi simba0722, thank you for your question.

I do believe that this version is more appropriate: I will never justify giving up a dream by exchanging it for the money offered.

or

I will never give up on my dream by exchanging it for a financial well-being.

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