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How to improve this text? The context is informal.thx The text is super informal and I hope you can help me to use some abbreviations that are common on social media. Thx. Content: Last year is one of the best year and I hope next year can also be counted in my "best year list". I grew up a lot mindfully and I feel thankful to myself because of some difficult decisions I made. To whom I love and who love me, thank you for accompanying me, I wish you all have a happy new year and stay healthy. ❤️

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Here's a suggestion on how to rewrite it this passage: Last year was one of the best years, and I hope next year can also be counted in my "best year list". I grew up living a mindful life and am thankful to myself for some of the difficult decisions I made. To those whom I love and who love me, thank you for accompanying me. I wish all of you a healthy and happy new year. ❤️
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Last year was one of my best years ever. I hope that next year will be one of my best years ever too. As a person, I grew so much and I am proud of the difficult choices I made to improve my life. To everyone I love and to those who love me, thank-you for your support and for staying by my side. I wish you all a happy and healthy new year! ❤🎉
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One phrase you can say instead of "mindfully" is "as a person", as in "I grew up a lot as a person". In informal contexts, you might also say "I grew up a lot inside". In both cases, the meaning is that you matured on the inside at a personal level, rather than outwardly in your career or things like that.

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