Did I translate this correctly?
I want to write it in English, but my skill is lame. Can you check, please?

"I suddenly miss Severus.
No, seriously if i go to the heaven after death, I expect to see him there existing as a real human.
He deserve it so badly."

Question

Did I translate this correctly?
I want to write it in English, but my skill is lame. Can you check, please?

"I suddenly miss Severus. 
No, seriously if i go to the heaven after death, I expect to see him there existing as a real human. 
He deserve it so badly."

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I would suggest: -

'I suddenly am missing Severus. No, seriously, if I go to heaven after dying, I am expecting to see him there existing as a real person. He really deserves that.''

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The only thing I would change would be "deserve" to "dererves". This "s" is added to the verb because it is a third person singular subject (he/she/it).
Apart from that it looks very good.

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Hi. What up

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almost right

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