I'd like to know this sentence is correct or not and if i can how can i make it shorter
"The life is only for the man who's changing in enthusiasm."

"The owner of the life is the man who's changing in enthsiasm."

they are same meaning but i don't know which one is more poweful meaning.
and i think it's quite long but i don't know how can i make it shorter.
if there is a more powerful and wise sentence in this meaning than my idea.
I'd love to know that.
please answer me the wise your opinion.

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I'd like to know this sentence is correct or not and if i can how can i make it shorter
"The life is only for the man who's changing in enthusiasm."

"The owner of the life is the man who's changing in enthsiasm."


they are same meaning but i don't know which one is more poweful meaning.
and i think it's quite long but i don't know how can i make it shorter.
if there is a more powerful and wise sentence in this meaning than my idea.
I'd love to know that.
please answer me the wise your opinion.

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A wise man changes his life with enthusiam. 

Life belongs to those who change with enthusiasm.

Accepting change with enthusiasm is the secret of life.

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I understand the sentences to mean something like this:

"Life changes, whether we like it or not.  We can only be happy if we accept this and adapt to change, staying positive, instead of trying to resist the changes and becoming embittered when we cannot stop Life from changing."

Now, that is very long.  It was only to express the meaning I saw.

How would we phrase it as a proverb?  Suggestions:

"Happy is he who can choose to dance in the waves of Life."

"The wise embrace that the only sure thing in Life is change."

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Last part of these sentences no make sense.

Think Denis' variants are good. But I don't see deep philosophy there too.
If wise man changes constantly - he's not wise :)

The best one is his last sentence.

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Hi Lucy. I'm sorry to say that neither sentence makes much sense to me.
One thing to note is that in english, we don't say "the life", as is done in many other languages. We only say "life", without "the".

Can  you tell us more about what your sentence means?

How would you write it in Korean? That may help someone translate it for you.

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hi babe neither the two sentences make sense to me and i have to admit that you are really improving seriously babe. bye

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