Does it sound natural? And any alternatives?
In 32 degrees Celsius (38°C apparent temperature), teenagers also join the series of protests in Hong Kong. There's the possibility that students will go on strike on the very beginning of school term.
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Hello. It would sound more natural written this way, "Even in 32 degree celsius weather teenagers join the series of protests in Hong Kong. There's a possibility that the students will continue their strike at the beginning of the school term."
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Many won’t know what you mean by “apparent temperature”.
It is unclear why you are stating the temperature. It doesn’t sound particularly extreme or relevant.
Teenagers are joining the protests in Hong Kong (in 32C heat). There’s a possibility that students will go on strike at the beginning of the school term.
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