Is this sentence okay?
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many of these areas are used for agricultural purposes, hence if we destroy them, food scarcity will be stroked in the not distant future .
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I would personally write "food scarcity will become a massive problem in the not so distant future".
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Thank you Gary
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No, 'PRODUCED/GENERATED' does not work with 'scarcity'. 'not too distant' is better.
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Thank you Jesús
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Many of these areas are used for agricultural purposes. Hence, if we destroy them, food scarcity will be PRODUCED/GENERATED in the not TOO distant future.
Hi There!
+ A little comma splice error after the word "purposes"
+ A comma will be needed after hence.
´+ Stroked ?? I thought that word does not fit in this context.
+In the not TOO distant future!
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