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hello, could anyone please check those sentence? i can help you with your Chinese:) 1: if a company failed to obtain a good employee management system, it will suffer from both explicit loss and people's willingness to work in this place. 2: image that, you are on a beach where packed with people whom are yelling, screaming, playing, and keeping throwing garbage or even peeing in the sea, will you still hold a deep love toward the coast-scenery-holiday? 3: how about the public servant exam? never mention about it! it was so difficult that not only i didn't finish it, but also i'm not sure weather the things i filled in are correct. which caused i have to fill all the last 10 blanks with"C"at the last minute, so terrible!

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Hello Gin. Great questions! As some editing is subjective, you may receive several different edits from different individuals. Please choose the one (or ones) that best meet your needs. 1. If a company fails to have a good employee management system, it may suffer from both explicit loss and people’s willingness to work there. 2. Imagine that you are on a beach packed with people yelling, screaming, playing and throwing garbage or even urinating in the sea. Will you still hold a deep love toward holidays on the coast? 3: How about the public servant exam? Never mention it to me! It was so difficult that not only did I did not finish it, but I’m also not even sure if the answers I gave were correct. I filled in the last 10 blanks with the letter “C” at the last minute. It was a terrible experience!
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1: If a company failed to obtain a good employee management system, it will suffer from both explicit loss and people's willingness to work for them. 2: Imagine you are on a beach packed with people who are yelling, screaming, playing, and throwing garbage or even peeing in the sea, will you still love the coast-scenery kind of holiday so much. 3: How about the public servant exam? Don't even mention it! It was so difficult that I not only didn't finish it, but I'm not even sure whether the things I've filled in were correct. This caused me to have filled the last ten blanks with Cs at the last minute. It was terrible!
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1. If a company failS to obtain ... 2. IMAGINE that you are on a beach PACKED with people WHO are yelling, screaming, playing, and THROWING garbage or even peeing in the sea, WOULD you still hold a deep love toward the coast-scenery-holiday? 3. How about the public SERVICE exam? Never TALK about it! It was so difficult that not only DID I NOT finish it, but I'm ALSO not sure WHETHER the things I filled in are correct. I HAD to fill the last 10 blanks with "C" at the last minute, IT WAS terrible!
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