Is my sentence correct?
My sentence is as follows:
I would like to register for banking services provided by XXX Bank as they offer great student loan packages at attractive rates of interest and low charges.
I wonder my sentence is natural and the prep. 'at' is used correctly or not.
Thank you for your advice :).
Have a nice day ahead.
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Answers · 6
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It's correct, although, I'd say "interest rates" instead of "rates of interest".
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@Tim Rus: Thank you so much :)
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sounds good to me.
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sounds good to me.
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