translation question
i have a text written in arabic and i translated it to english but iam sure my translation is not good plaese modify it

In the light of what we are living today in this world of media and what is happening in the Palestinian society in general, conditions
Political, social, economic, and psychological impact of a senior citizen in the life of the Palestinian awaiting him will be construed as a case, whether and in what his? ... Or it will increase the concerns of new concerns, and this of course due to the political situation on the Palestinian issue and the results the situation where the concerns of the Palestinian people all over the history of several issues including: ending the Israeli occupation of the Palestinians to crouch for more than 58 years and the achievement of the legitimate rights of the Palestinian people to freedom and independence and an independent Palestinian state with sovereignty over the land.

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translation question
i have a text written in arabic and i translated it to english but iam sure my translation is not good plaese modify it


In the light of what we are living today in this world of media and what is happening in the Palestinian society in general, conditions 
Political, social, economic, and psychological impact of a senior citizen in the life of the Palestinian awaiting him will be construed as a case, whether and in what his? ... Or it will increase the concerns of new concerns, and this of course due to the political situation on the Palestinian issue and the results the situation where the concerns of the Palestinian people all over the history of several issues including: ending the Israeli occupation of the Palestinians to crouch for more than 58 years and the achievement of the legitimate rights of the Palestinian people to freedom and independence and an independent Palestinian state with sovereignty over the land.

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I read your paragraph and it's very difficult to understand clearly what is being said. I think to accurately translate it, you need someone who has knowledge of Arabian so that he/she can translate it properly and it does not lose the message it's trying to get across. Some phrases don't make a lot of sense to me like for example: "Or it will increase the concerns of new concerns" and "ending the Israeli occupation of the Palestinians to crouch for more than 58 years".

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