What is the best verb in this situation?
"we are pleased to propose Mr. Eric to replace Mr. John, whom we have the intention to remove from this subsidiary due to a promotion within the group"

I don't think the verb "remove" is correct. What could be the best verb to use in this sentence? I accept additional corrections as well. Thank you

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What is the best verb in this situation?
"we are pleased to propose Mr. Eric to replace Mr. John, whom we have the intention to remove from this subsidiary due to a promotion within the group"

I don't think the verb "remove" is correct. What could be the best verb to use in this sentence? I accept additional corrections as well. Thank you

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I would say "transfer", if you want to keep the same sentence structure, although even that doesn't convey what's happening quite right. I might say "whom we intend to promote to (Job Title) within the X Group" to get the idea across a bit better.

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I would say "replace with"., or "demote', within our organization".

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Mr. John has been promoted within the group and his position will be fulfilled by MrEric.

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The usage of the verb "remove"  is ok, but the verb "withdraw" sounds more natural in this place. And in the first sentence you'd better use "recommend" instead of propose and apparently without to after it

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