Hi! Just a few minor suggestions: "Alice and her friend, White Rabbit, brought the children to Wonderland. There, two beautiful Snow Maidens unexpectedly met each other and presented many gifts to the children. Yeah (this is a colloquial expression so it's best in a quote, spoken by someone. e.g. "Yeah, what awesome gifts!" the child exclaimed). There, where the good cowboy gave tickets for a win-win lottery. Where Grandfather Frost teased his granddaughter and paid attention to each child. Thank you very much to those who created such fairy tales! We wish you happiness, joy and all the best for the coming year!" As an aside: I love the way you juxtaposed all these fairy tales, concluding with Old Man Frost... :) Cheers!