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Since we have expanded the Marketing and Communication department and with the aim to improve the internal communication, we want to launch a monthly newsletter of internal distribution.
is this correct?
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...with the aim of improving internal communication
1...ing form of a verb always follows a preposition
2. there is no need for the definite article 'the' as you are making a general reference and not contrasting with anything else
...for internal distribution.
1. 'for' is the preposition for purpose here as it is followed by a noun
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It is OK except for replacing the "of" with "for", if I understand the meaning correctly. I also prefer "As" to "Since", but since is not incorrect and if you are going to capitalise the Marketing and Communication you should capitalise Department as well.
I hope that helps.
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