Is this sentence correct? Please show me other re-write options of it.
The themes of the story are personal responsibility, using one's abilities to help others and cooperation. So, it has a message within a context.
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themes of the story
(I'm not satisfied with this word)
topics of the story
(what it is about, several items/points)
message(s) of the story
(what you want to tell /to express) (but you already wrote 'message' later in the sentence)
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I read this sentence in two ways
- With 1 main theme of Personal Responsibility (personal responsibility TO help others and cooperate with them). In this case I would use the singular for "theme" and a semi-colon - The theme of the story is personal responsibility; using One's abilities to cooperate with, and help others. There is therefore a hidden message within the story's context. (or within the context of the story).
- With 3 seperate themes - PR, helping others AND cooperation (although we can put the last two together. In this case I would use the plural like you have - The themes of the story are personal responsibility and the importance of helping others and cooperation. There is therefore a moral behind the story....[explain what it has shown you eg. ...story which is that through helping others, we can also help ourselves].
The word "themes" is correct. It means the same as topic/subject/what the story is about. It is a good word to use!
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"themes".. hm. Probably "The story tells us about..." and almost every other variant from previous answer are better, IMHO.
and the words responsibility and ability don't look nice (esp. here, standing one-by-one)
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