Hey, could anyone please check if the punctuation here is right and it sounds natural?
We’ve been working on putting all of the stories I wrote for my project that are based in Russia into the book of magical realism in Saint Petersburg. For those of you who’s interested, as a small preview, there’s a new translation of my very first story about the day I came to Russia: "Name of the story"
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..."for those of you that are interested.."
Instead of 'who's'
:)
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Or you could say "for those that are interested" or "for those who are interested"
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We’ve been working on putting all of the stories I wrote for my project that are based in Russia into the book of magical realism in Saint Petersburg. For those of you who ARE interested, as a small preview, there’s a new translation of my very first story about the day I came to Russia: "Name of the story"
The 2 sentences are very long and have multiple clauses, making them a little hard to follow.
Let's edit it:
I've been working on putting all of the russsian stories I wrote into a book of magical realism. As a preview, for those of you who ARE interested, it includes a new translation of "Name of the story". It is my very first story about the day I came to Russia:
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hello good morning
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I speak portuguêse... Do you help me in english?
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