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Are these sentences correct? Please build me a website. You wanted me to share my files with you. I asked him to come with me to a party last night. This project couldn't be fixed because of some recent restrictions from a website. He accepted a suggestion for finding a new way. I hadn't accepted to do the project before he accepted by sending him a video which did show him of how it works in order to be insured whether what he wants or not. You should be noticed, The footage was included in some texts and a button to click on. I did the project as well by supporting him unless he got final results for a long time. He started to crawl on the plenties of a website page which was around 500. The website banned his account because of sending many request in a row/periodically. You should be noticed that I did my job fine, but, he might not be satisfied with the reason I've just mentioned to you.

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Response part 2 "I did the project as well by supporting him unless he got final results for a long time." no. Again, I'm not sure what you are trying to say. My guess would be, "I did the project and will continue to support him while he awaits the final results which could take a long time." still a bit wordy. "He started to crawl on the plenties of a website page which was around 500." No, "He started to crawl on plenty of web pages, possibly around 500 of them." Better to say, "He started to crawl on about 500 web pages." "The website banned his account because of sending many request in a row/periodically." No, "The website banned his account, because he sent too many requests in a row." "You should be noticed that I did my job fine, but, he might not be satisfied with the reason I've just mentioned to you." No, "You will probably notice that I did my job well, but he might not be satisfied due to the reasons I have already mentioned to you."
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Response part 1 (I couldn't fit it all in one answer) "Please build me a website." This is O.K., but "Please build a website for me," is better. "You wanted me to share my files with you." Yes, but likely within a longer conversation. "I asked him to come with me to a party last night." Yes "This project couldn't be fixed because of some recent restrictions from a website." Yes, but a little odd. It may be better to say, "Due to some recent website restrictions, we were unable to complete (fix) the project." "He accepted a suggestion for finding a new way." Yes, but it doesn't sound natural. This is passive and, "finding a new way" usually goes with more information like, "finding a new way to solve the problem." I don't know the full context, but something like, "He decided to try Bob's suggestion for finding a new way to complete the project." "I hadn't accepted to do the project before he accepted by sending him a video which did show him of how it works in order to be insured whether what he wants or not." This is too wordy and I am not sure what you mean. If I have guessed correctly, I would word it, "I had not yet accepted the project when he not only accepted it, but provided the client with the information he needed, without even giving the client an opportunity to refuse his acceptance of the project." "You should be noticed, The footage was included in some texts and a button to click on." I don't know what you are trying to say, so I am not sure this suggestion works:"You will probably be noticed, because the footage was included in the text near the button people need to click."
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So you're another person with multiple accounts? I wonder how many users here do that? The first 5 are OK. The rest are not, and with several of them, it's not even clear what you are trying to say. And as a side note - shouldn't it have been obvious from the start that the website would have realised it was being scraped, and that they would react somehow?

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