Please correct my sentence more polite
Excuse me sir , Do you have time? We have a problem that , a little while ago , We have settled with credit card , but , then , something was caused and your credit card was not working , so , We would like to settle with credit card again .May i have your credit card ?

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It depends on whether the problem was caused by your equipment or his card.

Here are some natural ways to say it.

Excuse me, sir. We had a problem with our machine and your credit card charge didn’t go through. Can I have the card and try it again?

Excuse me, sir. There was a problem with your credit card. Can I try it again, or do you have a different one you’d like me to use?

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