How can I make this title more scientific while it's yet impressive?
This is the title of a scientific paper. I want it to be acceptable to native English editors and imply the importance of our findings to. So I'm not sure if there's a better structure to change with mine. And so I need your professional edit in here.
"In the First Year: Mother-corm size Has a More Significant Effect on Flower and Corm Yield of Saffron (Crocus sativus) than Application of Organic Fertilizers"
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I am not a scientist and perhaps I do not understand exactly what you want... but I will try.
Do you mean these results came after testing for one year?
"12 Month Trial: Mother-corm size Demonstrably More Influential on Crocus sativus (saffron) Floral/Corm Yield than Application of Organic Fertilizers"
If this testing happened in a laboratory, or under strict scientific conditions, you might be able to call it a "12 Month Clinical Trial."
hope this helps!
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