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Can you help me to modify it? QUESTION:Outline your career ambitions and objectives. In my first year of work, I would like to receive some training at the beginning and take some times to be familiar with the working environment and atmospheres. In the meantime, I will learn how to deal with the real work and improve my practical operation capacity and work coping ability. Also I will prepare for the examination of CPA. In the fifth year of my work, I would like to reflect on myself as a manager of what profits can I bring to my team and custom at all times.When I have finished 10 years of working, I, as a senior manager, would like to be able to get some new clients because I would like to create some more business for the company.In the 12th year of my working, I would like to formulate a suitable scheme on long-term development of the KPMG as a partner.

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1st year: • Receive training and familiarize self with work environment. • Improve practical operation capacity skills and workload proficiency. • Prepare for the CPA examination. 5th year: • As a manager, continue bringing maximum profits to customers and team member. 10th year: • As a senior manager a major focus will be on company growth by increasing new client revenue. 12th year: • Formulate a suitable plan on long-term development of the KPMG as a partner. Hope this helps. I would do something more like this. I'm not quite sure if this is what you were looking for. I'm not quite sure what you are needing this for either. Just guessing. It says outline so I changed it to more of the outline form with bullet statements. I did take out some repetitive statements and reworded statements in a more positive tone with stronger verbs. Also when you are talking about yourself always keep the statements positive. I did it more like you would a resume and used action wording (verbs) showing that you are a person that takes action. You don't use I statements. You probably also want some more statements in your 5th, 10th, and 12th year. If you have 3 bullet statements in the 1st year you want 3 in the others as well, symmetry. A great tool to have is a Thesaurus if you don't have one. Best of luck. If this isn't what you were looking for just ignore it :)
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You are more than welcome. I'm glad I was able to help :)

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