Hi Kseniia, There's actually a place on italki for writing things that you want the community to correct - it's called "Notebook" in English. But when it comes to the grammar, I'm more than happy to help! This would be my correction: School summer camp ). Summer is just a lot of fun and [it's a great time for learning] English , [you don't have to do hw or dictation at all] . Hmmm... but, we forgot one thing ! Where is our summer ??? What’s wrong with the weather ! When [will] it will be hot in Russia [?] ! [Still], we are in a good mood [nevertheless]. Some tips: 1. English speakers don't use "neither... nor..." constructions very often, but when they do, it's usually in a more formal context, and so it's rarely as a standalone sentence. You can coordinate noun phrases, verb phrases, adjective phrases, or prepositional phrases, but not really sentences: [Neither [the suspect] nor [the stolen money]] have been found She [neither [lies] nor [steals]] They are [neither [happy] nor [unhappy]] I can live [neither [with them] nor [without them]] 2. Remember that auxiliaries (like 'will', 'should', 'can/could', 'may/might', 'do' , 'have', etc) will move to the left of the subject in questions, so: ____________it [will] be summer [soon] When WILL it [<will>] be summer [<when>]? When DID it get warmer last year? Why WOULD you say that? I hope that helps! (And if you like these grammar explanations and want to try a lesson with me, look me up on 'Find a Teacher' - I'm always looking for new students!)

Summer is a lot of fun and is time to learn English , no homework or dictations at all . Hmmm... but, we forgot one thing ! Where is our summer ??? What’s wrong with the weather ! When will it be hot in Russia ! But, anyway we are in a good mood "Nevertheless" is a word used in more formal texts like academic essays, reports, scientific articles,etc. In your case it's better to use "anyway", it suits better the informal style.