How to getting better write for this message.
Dear Rin (My lovely daughter I guess the intonation sounds like.)
FROM: Father

When you were born, time has already not left too much.
I can't even remember after ur mom's (mother) gone (passed), how much love I putting on for (giving to) u.
Ur smile like an angel to papa, encouraged me from all of these ^_^

If really happened that I can going together would been so happiness (beauty, great), a little bit embarrassed for saying, but looks I'm failed (not make it).
Pray (hope) that u can forget everything and keep walking (going). I know if is u (my daughter) will surely do that (can do that).
Perhaps u'll remember us (all, memories, everything) when you feel alone (lonely).

Read this letter u will (could) getting to be strong (stronger). I believed.
I thought could makes more memories with u (I though we could makes more memories), sorry.
Maybe ur too young to understand, but I think u can now!

Let me say those words once again from (after) that day.

Question

How to getting better write for this message.
Dear Rin                 (My lovely daughter I guess the intonation sounds like.)
FROM: Father

When you were born, time has already not left too much.
I can't even remember after ur mom's (mother) gone (passed), how much love I putting on for (giving to) u.
Ur smile like an angel to papa, encouraged me from all of these ^_^

If really happened that I can going together would been so happiness (beauty, great), a little bit embarrassed for saying, but looks I'm failed (not make it).
Pray (hope) that u can forget everything and keep walking (going). I know if is u (my daughter) will surely do that (can do that).
Perhaps u'll remember us (all, memories, everything) when you feel alone (lonely).

Read this letter u will (could) getting to be strong (stronger). I believed.
I thought could makes more memories with u (I though we could makes more memories), sorry.
Maybe ur too young to understand, but I think u can now!

Let me say those words once again from (after) that day.

Answer

"It seems like yesterday since I first help you in my hands. I remember how much I loved you, especially after your mother passed away. Your smile was like an angel's and inspired me on everyday.

If we could see one another, it would make me unspeakably happy, though it's difficult for me to say as I've not always been there. I pray/hope that as father and daughter we can forget and forgive each other. Perhaps you will remember the good memories we've had.

I thought we were going to make more memories together, spend more time together, than we did, I was wrong and I'm sorry about it. You might be to young to understand, but I hope that you will."

(Some of what you originally wrote can have multiple meanings so I've tried to interpret as best I can without knowing your context. For example, I'm not sure if you have been estranged from your daughter for a long time or if you have only had an argument with her and are trying to reconcile. Please have someone who speaks your language and English read through this letter for you before you send it as the difference in meaning between these two circumstances is significant!)

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