Does this sound natural? Can you help me to modify it?
To rapid economic growth is not to limit the development of a place. If we do slow the economic growth rate, we can get a cleaner living environment which will attract more business men and enterprises to make huge investment in city, especially in tourism.
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Hi!
I'm a little confused by your use of "rapid" as a verb, do you mean "quicken" (to make something go faster)?
You should also change "investment" into a plural, "huge investments", and add "the" before "city". Other than that, the sentence is great.
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hahaha, you're right! I should modify it! Thanks!
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And you can leave out the "men". Women run businesses too.
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