please help me correct it
Dear sir
I am writing about the bank staff. Weekday, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking movements. In addition to this, i want to notify about the slower service attention caused by the shortage of bank staff. Please help us to have a better customer service and a lower workload in the bank staff.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
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It is difficult to tell what you are asking. Here is a possible rewrite.
Dear sir
I am writing concerning customer service at you bank. On weekdays, the bank's clients are allowed to schedule multiple appointments with the staff. This is causing slower service because of the overbooking of your staff. Customer service would be improved if this overbooking was decreased.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
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Thia is tricky since i am not sure what you are trying to say. one thing that is clear though is you are not writing about the bank staff but instead are concerned about the process or consequences of the processes that they have in place.
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