please help me correct it
Dear sir
I am writing about the bank staff. Weekday, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking movements. In addition to this, i want to notify about the slower service attention caused by the shortage of bank staff. Please help us to have a better customer service and a lower workload in the bank staff.

I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully

Question

please help me correct it
Dear sir
I am writing about the bank staff. Weekday, the bank's clients schedule multiple appointments with the bank staff to make banking movements. In addition to this, i want to notify about the slower service attention caused by the shortage of bank staff. Please help us to have a better customer service and a lower workload in the bank staff.

I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully

Answer

Hablas español? Tengo algunas preguntas sobre lo que has escrito porque no entiendo la relación entre tu y el receptor del correo. Es que trabajas para el banco y quieres notificar los supieriores sobre la gestión de tu sucursal, o tienes quejas sobre las acciones de los empleados en un banco donde eres un cliente?

Espero que pueda ayudarte más.

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This is tricky since the meaning isn't completely clear. one thing i am sure of is that you are not writing about the bank staff but instead some process or consequence of a process.

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