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There once was a genius man. He desired to change that cruel world and be able to influence the world view of many politics. So, one day he met a woman, fell in love and asked to be his wife. That lady changed his life. From now on he thought that the world revolved around her. Unfortunately, his wife passed away and his world fell apart. He started living in his own small world, he shut out the world. The genius man gave up his dream to take on the world and comitted a suicide. Then that event shook the whole world.
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There once was a genius man. He desired to change *the* cruel world and be able to influence the *worldview* of many *politicians*. So, one day he met a woman, fell in love and asked *her* to be his wife. That lady changed his life. From now on he thought that the world revolved around her. Unfortunately, his wife passed away and his world fell apart. He started living in his own small world, he shut out the world. The genius man gave up his dream to take on the world and *committed suicide*. Then that event shook the whole world.
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