Did I make any mistake ?
Dear mike,  

Thanks for your letter.I am happy to hear from you.
  Regarding your question, the best time to visit my country
is in summer, because as you probably know, in Spain,
there ara some excellent beaches. You could do a lot of
interesting things here, such as going to the beach, going out at night …

  However if you prefer to do sports, you could climb mountains
or maybe you could find search one of the thousands parks that
there are with gymnastic rings and bars .  

Well I have to go now .Don’t forget to write back soon.

  Best wishes,  

Dan.

Question

Did I make any mistake ?
Dear mike,

Thanks  for your letter.I am happy to hear from you.
  Regarding your question, the best time to visit my country 
is in summer, because as you probably know, in  Spain, 
there ara some excellent beaches. You could do a lot of 
interesting things here, such as going to the beach, going out at night …

However if you prefer to do sports, you could climb mountains 
or maybe you could find search one of the thousands parks that 
there are with gymnastic rings and bars .

Well I have to go now .Don’t forget to write back soon.

Best wishes,

Dan.

Answer

Thanks for your letter.I am happy to hear from you.
Regarding your question, the best time to visit my country 
is in summer, because as you probably know, in Spain, 
there ARE some excellent beaches. You could do a lot of 
interesting things here, such as going to the beach, going out at night …

However if you prefer to do sports, you could climb mountains 
or maybe you could FIND  one of the thousands OF parks that 
there are with gymnastic rings and bars .

Well I have to go now .Don’t forget to write back soon.
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You would say either 'find' or 'search for', not 'find search'.

Also, it may depend on where the person is from who you are writing to, but 'sports' in the USA usually refers to organized sports, like tennis, football, or baseball.  Gymnastics or mountain climbing and biking you might say 'However, if you prefer physical exercise'

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