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Hi everyone! I have to writte a letter to a friend about my favourite kind of holiday.

Dear Jonh,  

My favourite kind of holiday is going to the beach. I have gone there with my family since I was 11 years .  When I go to the beach I really enjoy diving and sunbathing. How you know I am healthy and I like doing sports .  However sometimes when I am at the beach with my sister we play volleyball and after that we always go at the same restaurant  and we eat a lot.

  I hope that you can text me back and tell me what about your favorite kind of holiday.  

Best wishes,

  Dani

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Can you help me with the mistakes?
Hi everyone!  I have to writte a letter to a friend about my favourite kind of holiday.

Dear Jonh,

My favourite kind of holiday is going to the beach.  I have gone there with my family  since I was 11 years .  When I go to the beach I really enjoy diving and sunbathing. How you know I am healthy and  I like doing sports .  However sometimes when I am at the beach with my sister we play volleyball and after that we always go at the same restaurant  and we eat a lot.

I hope that you can text me back and tell me what about your favorite kind of holiday.

Best wishes,

Dani

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Dear John,

My favorite kind of holiday is going to the beach. I have gone there with my family since I was 11 years old. When I go to the beach I really enjoy diving and sunbathing. You should know that I am healthy and I like doing sports.  However sometimes when I am at the beach with my sister we play volleyball and after that we always go at the same restaurant  and we eat a lot.

I hope that you can text me back and tell me about your favorite kind of holiday.

Best wishes,

Dani

--Hey Hey Dani,
I hope this correction helps you . :)

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