Hi! You made a couple of very small errors. Here is how the paragraph should read, "shounen-ai? I thought ABOUT watchING some spider-man or some dismemberment MOVIE in the style where someone's arm flies IN one direction, the foot IN the other etc. you know... idk, I don't remember myself watching something like that, but the graphics are not bad, hmm ok, I can try to watch this disgusting thing for a change." I capitalized the changes. Hope this helps!