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Could you help me correct this essayThis cartoon describes a man dating with a woman, but the woman is just immersed in the photo sharing process and ignores the man.The man shows a little bit of anger. What I want to say about the scenes described in the cartoon is that people are getting down to play mobile phones more and more, which should arouse the reflection of the people.

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The cartoon started with a date between a man and a woman. She was so into her mobile phone and sharing photos and the man started to get mad at her behaviour because she ignored him at the date. The message I want to bring out throught the cartoon is that people are addicted to their mobile phone and this is getting worse which desevres our concern.

I am an English learner myself and just randomly made it up but hope this helps

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