you have mixed past and present in some sentences like "always helped" and " felt safe". it will be " helps" and "feels safe".

Hey Leon, I shall rewrite your sentence, for some correction may be needed: ''She is a person who is very kind and pretty (or ''She is a very kind and pretty person...''). She always helps/helped me when I am/was in trouble and comforts/comforted me when I am/was sad. I always feel/felt safe beside her. I do not want her to worry about me too much. She is the one to whom I would never lie, and I promise I will say ''welcome back'' the next time we meet. Hope that helps!

She is a person who is very kind and pretty. She always helps/helped when I am/was in trouble and comforts/comforted me when I am/was sad. I always feel/felt safe beside her. I don't want her to worry about me too much. She is the one I will never lie to. I promise I will say "welcome back" the next time we meet. Your entry is well-written and organised though you should pay attention to grammar and spelling. In the second sentence, you mix the present and past tenses. When you use "when" to connect clauses, make sure that the tenses match each other. When you use a to-infinitive, the verb doesn't need to be conjugated. "To worried" (incorrect) -> "to worry". Spelling: "safty"-> "safety"

Thanks for telling!

Entries like these should be posted in the "notebook" section because the notebook section allows us to correct more effectively when evaluating texts, essays, etc.