Mostly pretty good English. Some minor corrections: For the last few decades, due to industrialization, the climate has been changing dramatically. Although some people think that preventing detrimental climate change should be addressed at the individual level, it could be strongly argued that the government should take preventive actions to protect the environment instead of shirking responsibility. Therefore, it would be analyzed under the following key factors such as making policies to control the damage people do to the environment and raising awareness of the causes that affect climate change.