How should I revise the sentence?
"It is realistic that the amount of funding be adjusted corresponding to the financial status of local governments."

Does the sentence looks nice and proper in an academic essay?

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How should I revise the sentence?
"It is realistic that the amount of funding be adjusted corresponding to the financial status of local governments."

Does the sentence looks nice and proper in an academic essay?

Answer

"It is realistic that the amount of funding be adjusted corresponding to the financial status of local governments."
   This is understandeable but doesn't sound natural.
The amount of funding to local governments can realistically be adjusted according to their financial situation.
          This is probably how I would wite it but there are other alternatives.

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