Can you please read my text here and give me some recommendations?
I'd like to be a citizen of the world. In some countries are going a war, it is dangerous to be here, so I wouldn't want to live in such countries. As for the rest I'd like to live in absolutely different countries. When I was children I and my parents used to ride to the village or to stay with relatives in distant scrids of Russia. When I was a school I with my parents went to abroad first time, and this was amazing! New peoples, architecture, traditions, сustoms, foods so much everything! Now I have more than 25 countries in list and I am planning a new travelings. I am in love with a Old Cities Europe, I really like Catholic temples and churches, narrow streets, much cozy cafes and a Christmas Markets. I much liked Asia, although I was tired in the end of each travels.) I don't aim on "get out of Russia", but if I'll have a chance or offer from another country I'll take that chance.
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Ok let's break it down:
I'd like to be a citizen of the world. In some countries wars are going on (going on for use in time, the war is not literally going), it is dangerous to be there (use here if you are in a war zone right now, I hope you are not), so I wouldn't want to live in such countries. As for the rest I'd like to live in absolutely different kinds of countries (use "kinds of" to show variety). When I was a child I and my parents used to ride (if you went with the car use drive, ride is for going there on a horse) to the village or to stay with relatives in distant scrids of Russia. When I was [in] school I went abroad (verb follows the subject) with my parents for the first time, and this was amazing! New peoples, architecture, traditions, сustoms, foods so much [of] everything! Now I have more than 25 countries on the (or "on my" would be used more) list and I am planning new travels (no articles before plurals). I am in love with Old Cities of Europe, I really like Catholic temples and churches, narrow streets, many (if you can count it use many, like 1 café, 3 or 7 cafés) cozy cafés and Christmas Markets. I much liked Asia, although I was tired in the end of each journey (if you finished it you can say journey).) I don't aim [for] "get out of Russia", but if I'll have a chance or offer from another country I'll take that chance.
I hope it is overseeable ^^ I used [ ] when I added a preposition
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Hello Coral B! I ask recommendations for improve my writing, but if you know interesting places, I'd like to listen about them.
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That is one of my favourite phrases "citizen of the world", and I agree with you about wanting to be one, especially in today's increasingly nationalistic political climate. Good luck with all your travels in the future! It all sounds very exciting. When you ask for recommendations, do you mean places to visit or how to improve your writing? You write very well in English by the way.
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Of course, at the reality I'll explore some moment, collect information about country, about my needs and will make a decision. =)
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