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are there any mistakes in the sentences? i want to talk about something of my works as below. are there any mistakes in the sentences? if i want to convey certain ideas to you with my works, i would try to make it apparent and simple. however, if you get nothing from my works, either the access is not available to you or i mean to blur the concept. thanks a lot.

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Do you sell art works? If not, I don't know what "works" mean. Although your sentence uses good vocabulary, it makes little sense. Next time, specify the idea or make something tangible. Although some of the words are good, the idea isn't clear. If I want to convey certain ideas to you with my works, I'll try to make it simple. However, if you cannot get anything from my works, either the access is not available to you or the image is a blur... (what happens next?)
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"the access is unavailable to you" doesn't make much sense and the meaning is not clear. It's better to say that something is "beyond" someone, rather than that they can't access it. Also, the second clause of the second sentence is in the subjunctive case because of the use of "if," meaning you need to use past tense. I would rewrite the second sentence as follows: "However, if you get nothing from my works, either the content was beyond you or I meant to blur the concept." The first sentence is correct, and you used the subjunctive case correctly there (If...would). Don't worry, the subjunctive case is sometimes tricky even for native English speakers! Also, generally in English we just say "my work" meaning "the product of my labor," rather than "my works." Both ways are correct, but most people use "work" instead of "works" for this purpose.
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Comma splice.
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ok Lets see good writting but I would should be I will i meant I hope I wrote all mistakeS as i couldnot understand what you wrote www.englishdaily626.com great site will be helpful thank you

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