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Guys please check this short IELTS writing exercise for grammar mistakes. N5 Learning a foreign language is a long and hard process. Having a certain goal in mind, be that new work opportunities of the opportunities to hold a conversation while travelling must be the biggest motivator. These kind of goals help to ensure decent life and confidence. When you are provided with a new workplace abroad or have a possibility to travel to a foreign country those reasons will help to build your stability, success and social status. Humans are all social beings and, being a part of a social group fulfills our moral satisfaction and our need in others’ support. It could be argued that learning foreign languages for these purposes only may be cynical, but they are usually the source of our intentions to learn one language or another. In truth, the reasons why people start learning other languages are countless. One of the most important is cultural development. As an old chinese expression goes: “You are as many times a human, as many languages you know.”Certainly it is true and the people who know more than one language tend to think “wider” and understand different points of view. Therefore it helps you not only in obtaining a job you need, but also in becoming a more interesting person, thus having more friends. For another example we can think of educational reasons, as educational system may drastically differ from the system in your country. You may also be able to get access to certain materials, that were unavailable to you before, such as books, movies and news. In conclusion, I think that everyone must set their own purposes, but make it wisely, considering all possibilities. Fortunately the reasons for learning a foreign may, indeed. be very different.

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It seems pretty good to me. I think you needed a comma after travelling to make it clear what the last part of that sentence refers to. 'need in others'' - did you mean 'need for others'? 'make it wisely' - what does 'it' refer to? I think you're missing 'language' after the last 'foreign', and there's a '.' after indeed, not a ','.

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