is this paragraph good and correct , if not how can it be modified?
I am pursuing my Bachelor’s degree in physics at university of toronto.
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I am pursuing my bachelor's degree in physics at the University of Toronto.
I am hard-working and self-motivated. I enjoy learning new things and have a high academic standard for myself.
Interested in science and technology, particularly medical technology.
Seeking a position where I can utilize and apply my knowledge and skills.
NOTES:
- This is written in the style of a personal ad, which doesn't require full sentences. If you're writing a letter, it needs to be in full sentences: "I am interested in..." and "I am seeking..."
- The term "bachelor's degree" is not capitalized.
- Names of universities are always capitalized, because they're proper nouns.
- "Hard-working" and "self-motivated" are hyphenated.
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Currently, I am pursuing my Bachelor’s degree in physics at the University of Toronto.
I am hard working and self motivated and I am driven to learn new things. In addition, I set a high academic standard for myself.
My interests are in science, technology and medical technology.
I am seeking a position where I can utilize and apply my knowledge and skills.
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