I translated something from Chinese to English and I`m not sure whether it`s good to native speakers
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Hangzhou,the capital city of China`s Zhejiang province,is known for its beautiful scenery and innovative vitality.The logo of the G20 Hangzhou Summit is a bridge outlined by 20 lines, supplemented by the English for"G20 in the year of 2016"and the Chinese for"China" in a traditional seal style.Bridge bears a special meaning in G20.The summit is a historical progress as it offers a mechanism for all countries, be it developed or develping, to take a equal part in global economy governance, which was once totally controlled by developed countries.In this sense the G20 is a bridge on its own,linking not only the past and the future but also the developed and the developing.
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Hi, this is a very good text with only very minor corrections.
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Hangzhou, the capital city of China`s Zhejiang province, is known for its beautiful scenery and innovative vitality. The logo of the G20 Hangzhou Summit [depicts] a bridge [made up of] 20 lines, supplemented by the English [text] "G20 in the year of 2016" and the Chinese for "China" in a traditional seal style. [The] [b]ridge bears a special meaning [for the] G20.The summit [symbolises] historical progress as it offers a mechanism for all countries, be [they] developed or develping, to take [an] equal part in global [economic] governance, which was once totally controlled by developed countries. In this sense[,] the G20 is a bridge [in its own right], linking not only the past and the future but also the developed and the developing.
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I've included my edits in [square brackets]. Also, before and after punctuation (commas , and quotation marks "") you omitted a space. Let me know what you think!
Walter :)
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CATTI?
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