Could you help me edit my paragraph English, please?
In every human life, everyone will have a special day for themselves and me too. That special day was the day I left home to go to high school in a boarding school with lots of fun and sadness. Since I was in boarding school, I cried every night. Cry for homesick, crying because I do not know you new, to now I do not know how many times I cried. Then time has made me realize that I need to grow up against self-reliance. I began to get acquainted with more friends, take off more. I'm not alone. My friends share the food in their hometown brought up and me too. We study together, doing homework together. At that time I felt like it was my second home. Happy times will be sad. Living in the collective will sometimes struggle with each other but in the end we sit back and talk straight and life becomes calm again. During my three years in boarding school, I learned a lot of useful things and sentiments that affectionately affectioned my friends. So when we graduated, we remembered it as a special story about independent life and fun experiences with friends.

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That's not too bad. One thing is that you need to focus more on your tense. In this case it's past continuous tense.

In everyone's life they have a special day for themselves. I had one of those days. That special day was the day I left home to go to a  high school boarding house. The day had lots of fun and sadness. I cried every night because I was at a boarding school. I cried because I was homesick, and everything around me was new. I cried so many times that I lost count. In time I realized that I had to grow up and become more self reliant.I began meeting new friends, and I did not feel alone. My friends shared food from their hometowns. We studied and did homework together.  At that time it felt like it was my second home. Happy times were also sad. People living together will sometimes struggle, but it is important to talk strait with each other and remain calm.  During my three years in boarding school I learned a lot of useful things, and had affectionate sentiments towards my friends. When we graduated we remembered this special story about independent life and fun experiences with friends.

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Ya it is common with all people when they live their home and go out for study and they managed after a while.
Very interesting thing is that after a while when there become a lot of friends we enjoyed a lot..

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