Which is the better ending for a santimental essay? I wrote an essay depicting the pursuit of my dream,now the question is I can't not decide which to use as a better ending.Help me decide and explain,thanks. Below is the last paragraph,what you need to do is compare the two sentences in the bracket and choose one as the ending sentence.I know they are quite similar,but I want to know which reads more comfortable in tone with the atmosphere of the essay.If you're glad to read the whole essay to help me,contact me using [email protected],I'll be really happy to receive your helping hand. The ending: Yes, I'm just a girl wandering on the narrow road of my long, long journey. I've finished a quarter of my journey to Zhenhai. Yet as for the journey to my dream, to my life, (I have only just begun. OR I've just started).