Charcoal heavens pregnant with rain held back a sobbing tear... Darkened sky, will you cry? The black sky foretold rain. okay enuf fun

I would fix it as such: The sky was dark, it looked like rain. Is there another definitive answer! Thanks! Love, Maria

The sky was dark it looked like rain. it was not cold but clear drain without you we can bargain don't stop this and enjoy the rain and give me one unclear claim to understand what was with pain which disappeared not detained it was severe what else to say I have just written such simple poem without clear meaning.