i really need help!!!
Yang comes from China , has 5 years working experience in marketing , she likes going for walks and reading , she is particularly interested in different cultures , a foodie but not a good cook .

Nabil Alame is french lebanese who challenged himself and lost thirty kilograms, since then he is addicted to working out and tries to keep his diet healthy. He traveled to more than 10 countries and speaks three languages. He loves going out and spending time with friends.

Kevin Jammes is a huge sports fan and football player too. He traveled a lot in Asia and Africa. He likes meeting new people and new cultures. He is mixed race from Rwanda and France.

Ana Sofia is a proud salvadorian (with a colombian mother) living in France. She speaks four languages and wants to learn many more. She is a huge food lover and loves to discover new cultures through it. She is not really into sports but loves outdoors activities.

is there anyone could correct these sentences???

Question

i really need help!!!
Yang comes from China , has 5 years working experience in marketing , she likes going for walks and reading , she is particularly interested in different cultures , a foodie but not a good cook .

Nabil Alame is french lebanese who challenged himself and lost thirty kilograms, since then he is addicted to working out and tries to keep his diet healthy. He traveled to more than 10 countries and speaks three languages. He loves going out and spending time with friends.

Kevin Jammes is a huge sports fan and football player too. He traveled a lot in Asia and Africa. He likes meeting new people and new cultures. He is mixed race from Rwanda and France.

Ana Sofia is a proud salvadorian (with a colombian mother) living in France. She speaks four languages and wants to learn many more. She is a huge food lover and loves to discover new cultures through it. She is not really into sports but loves outdoors activities.

is there anyone could correct these sentences???

Answer

If you want corrections, you are better to post a notebook entry, rather than as a question.
You should capitalise your nationalities. 
she's a foodie
'is a French Lebanese who' or  is 'French Lebanese. He'
he has been addicted
He has traveled
and a football

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