Is this ok? She looks like a mixed race with curly brown hair and bright eyes.
I mean she is Chinese. but she looks like foreign because of her curly brown hair and bright eyes.

Thanks

Question

Is this ok? She looks like a mixed race with curly brown hair and bright eyes.
I mean she is Chinese. but she looks like foreign because of her curly brown hair and bright eyes.

Thanks

Answer

Grammar:
Lose the "a." And change "mixed race" to "multi-racial."

Etiquette:
This sentence is icky and off-putting.  In my corner of the US, this sentence is not an "ok" thing to say.  Just leave it at "She has curly hair and bright eyes."

Answer

You need to mention that she is Chinese first.
Then you said say "She looks mixed with her curly brown hair and bright (light-coloured) eyes."
Without mentioning Chinese first, this sentence by itself doesn't make sense.

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