"She will pay some contributions in society on her life's road because she has met several benefactors who have guided her development of what she is now." My suggestions on some phrases: * pay contributions in society -> make contributions to society. * on her life's road -> (later) in her life / in the rest of her life / in the course of her life, etc. * guided her development of ... -> guided her to ... / shaped her (person) to ... (if you want to include "development", then I think it should be "guided her development to make her what/who she is now", but it seems too long without adding anything substantial) Here's a few alternatives you might consider. 1. She wants to make contributions to society in her life because she has met several benefactors who helped shape her person to who she is now. 2. She'd like to make her own contributions to society in her life, in return for the benefits she received from those who helped guide her to where she is now. (changing things around) 3. As several people have been kind enough to give her guidance to get to where she is now, she would like to make her own contributions to society in return.